always wake up with a shock!!
Just before 10 minutes to eight,
pasting my brush I run on my feet.
Taking the shit along with brushing,
throwing some water on my hairs standing.
Deodorizing,combing,creaming Over,
with a rough copy I move to mess closer.
Breaking my fast I go to class,
reaching the last I watch the whole mass.
Boring lectures make me drowse ,then sleep,
on the last bench the professor can't peep.
Attendance time is break time for me,
to realize my presence, teacher can see.
It just goes on as the day moves on,
the class ends and my party starts on.
Missing not a single volleyball play,
enjoy as I serve,smash and sway.
Evening goes up with friends and chit-chat;
it sparkles with orkut ting and voice-chat.
Now the clock ticks only ten,
waiting for birthday-bash again.
searching for someone who will get GPL,
if no one music,movies are not in sell.
The midnight-hour starts day-next,
Oh my God! tomorrow is a test
of SOM which is Sell Of Mind.
Hey you Studious! Please tomorrow be kind.
Two hours ran faster than I guess
and Oh! it's all a huge mess.
Some bad habits I never miss,
and do them without any one's notice.
Now it's really four....
It's time to snore.
Tomorrow will be the same day again.
Let's see what different conclusions I gain.
bhai aisa lag raha hai ki ye to mera hi time table hai.....
ReplyDeleteaur khaas kar wo "bad habits" wala line to......u can udrstnd!!!!
Mast Poem hai...
Jhakkas!!!
ReplyDeletenumber one...
mast...
how easily u hav brought up our daily routine in ur poem...
nice work man!!!
kya bolu yar ......padh ke to bolti hi band ho gayi apni........i'm feeling very good that a guy living among us is able 2 think like that!!!!
ReplyDeletewat a creative mind........really mind blowing.........keep it up man.....
from now u get one more fan added to ur list...
gud and exellent work...........keep it up!!!!!!!but listen a poet dosnt ryt 4 himself,but 4 others....
ReplyDeleteenlarge ur refrence frame....include those 2 who r not connected 2 ur lyf...and try 2 express their fellings...how nice u express them ,will tell how nice poet u r!!!
its coool........nice.and vbry creative piece of work dude!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletemast hai............
ReplyDeletekafi improve ho raha hai tu......
well i think this wasn't asked for but the comments here shock me more than anything else.
ReplyDeleteDisappointing.. and the views of the guys here are dumbfounding..
Anyways, happy writing. You know that you have it in you; and believe me nothing else matters
U've described d true life in NIT JSR in a very specific order......
ReplyDeleteIt really always remember me my hostel life...
Excellent poem.....keep it up......
tis jus perfect ..
ReplyDeletelovely..
itni
ReplyDeletebhayaanak english maine kahin kisi poem me nahi dekh.
abe kuch aur likh
itni bhayaanak english maine kahin nahi dekhi..
ReplyDeleteabe kuch aur likh
i liked the two lines most
ReplyDeletethe first one studious be kind and the second one do it without notice.
lovely poem brother
keep it up....