Thursday, April 23, 2009

The Door Closed

The light rays cross the windows
and lighten up fading shadows.
With coffee and news as I posed,
I heard the knock at the door closed.

Opening it, I found a little figure
showing usual gestures,trained shiver.
Everyday Drama! My reaction was same;
the door closed shouldn't be opened again.

I sat, I worked, I ate, I thought,
The face I showed, the hatred I brought.
My mind disturbed me throughout the day;
the door closed should get opened next day.

Human virtues are challenged to faces so numb,
but facing them in reality often makes us dumb!

6 comments:

  1. Nice poem and a very nice thought to write on .., well done man keep it up.

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  2. nice poem nd a different but real world theme.....

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  3. you are improving day by day...
    this was best i read..
    keep this in practice...
    best wishes to you

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  4. very gud

    i liked it ..

    its just g8t no worlds to .. !lolx

    wel done keep it up ..! thx for a gr8 Share

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  5. a good human nature is shown . And its my favorite poem 4rm ur side till now......

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  6. tis is really nice ..especially d beginning...quite captivating ..bt wot ws dat u saw made u feel so disturbed...u cud hv written moe on dat ....
    jus keep up d fab work ...
    judicious use of time ...
    gud

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