The day lends me all the daily stuff;
the sunset ensures I've got enough.
Questioning myself about pros and cons
but concluding the day is really tough.
Splashing cold water over my face;
judging whole day as a serious case.
I hardly find any flaw in me,suddenly
the dusk bids adieu with a great pace.
Now I plan for the coming day;
words that should be thought before I say.
Actions that would make me a star;
shining the brightest wherever I stay.
My dusk-to-dawn routine goes on everyday
in the hope of getting my right way!
Anything cannot be better then it
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem I became ur FAN man
isliye ab ham bhi poem likhne lage hai..
well it is nice.. somewhere everyone feels this way.. avoid -ing at many places it sets the thing passive.. happy writing..
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ReplyDeleteyou are getting better and better... this was the best i can say...
ReplyDeleteyou've written it very nicely . It reveals your maturity in this field.....gud.....
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