Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Virtual Reality

Viewing the world through the facade,
calling oneself cool,candour,caring;
Time of proof is proven hard.
Discover new individuality with sharing!

Enjoying condescending talks with friends,
feeling the galore, pride,fun;
Sudden disappointment,friendship ends.
Work on guys' discretion or shun!

Remarking some people as fiends,
showing enmity, hatred, the back;
Friends go, they replace the needs.
Get ready for how the situations hack!

Time fills the brain, heals the pain.
Let Situations judge, we play the game!

4 comments:

  1. description of student life is done very well but it can be made a little bit more beautiful too as u've left few points .But ur try is very much appreciable ......I like it.......

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  2. Very nice

    keeep it up am waiting abt yr Next POst ............

    thx again for a gr8 share .!

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  3. hey well written ...bt d whole message u tried to convey is a lil unclear..it cn b made longer ..wen u hv tym...
    well overall really virtual reality ...

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