Thursday, December 11, 2008

BROKEN REFLECTION

I used to see a face in my mirror,
so young so sweet so nice so dear;
thought it'd remain so forever
and today i find my reflection gone somewhere.

I lost myself so fast i couldn't realize
like turning pages to query the end.
I tried to grab something in time
but who can survive long with unreal.

They say life shows different colours
and i like the one i liked though no meanings.
My present reflection mocks at me
so I've lost something special of me.

A broken reflection is all i have
got distorted since i lost mine.
Wish i could ever touch it!
The reflection has given its deep impression.

I had forgotten the reflection
since i last saw it in affection.
But the wounds are torn again
when the world asks me about myself.

I need something to see into.
I want my "self" back to me
because the essence of reflection has lost with years
But the faith to get it back is still in my tears.

11 comments:

  1. prety Kool

    iz that belongs from u...!
    i dun belive=)

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  2. Oye Yaaar tune to 1dm meri baat likh dali. Weldone.
    "KEEP IT UP"

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  3. gud feel to it..nice idea..somewhere someday every does feel it..but to be honest work on your expressions..you could do a lot better..i know it..

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  4. this is too good n too deep a thought man
    hats off for u.........

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  5. cool man.........its wonderful lovely and deep............aur kya kahu....sabd nahi hai

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  6. hats off 2 u yaar....

    if really it's 4m ur Heart...listen me...leave B.Tech today itself & start up with expressing your deep thoughts...bring them before the people....let d world knoe 'U'...hone up your hidden talents...mannn..u r d Wordsworth & Milton of 21st century...take it certified....

    Keep it up,bravo!!!!

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  7. very well said dude....keep creating such beautiful 1's

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  8. a nice one...keep creating such beautiful ones

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  9. seriously man.....m touched...emotiionally...
    m speechless....
    astonished...

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  10. its gud ..infct reaaly nice ..theme is really gud..very original ...
    bt wen subject is so nice ..u cn use a lil different form of writing .

    with such poems ..try it nxt tym ..
    i guess dat will enhance ur skills ..

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